Wednesday 26 October 2011

Example of a Good and Bad Business Email


This is a good business email because it is formatted correctly and it is easy to follow. 


This is an example of a bad business email because the writer has an inappropriate email address and also uses text talk in her message. The subject is not supposed to be in all capital letters and "Good afternoon, Mr. Carey" is not supposed to be bold. In a proper email it would just say, Dear Mr. Carey.

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